11-19-2025, 05:58 PM
Literary in contempt
a mind scattered
on paper.
Fighting against himself,
always losing,
slivers win.
Could he be whole?
He should still reside -
within.
Based on Fernando Pessoa's book of disquiet
a mind scattered
on paper.
Fighting against himself,
always losing,
slivers win.
Could he be whole?
He should still reside -
within.
Based on Fernando Pessoa's book of disquiet
I know that rhyme, rhythm, and meter are not academically standardized.
I am well aware of that, yet I primarily do free verse, and it's based on instinctual writing.
I try to avoid academic language or structure. My poems are not meant to convey a single answer.
I try to convey the unknown through minimalism, mostly dense short stanzas with many line breaks.
If you'd give a critique, please keep this in mind.
I am well aware of that, yet I primarily do free verse, and it's based on instinctual writing.
I try to avoid academic language or structure. My poems are not meant to convey a single answer.
I try to convey the unknown through minimalism, mostly dense short stanzas with many line breaks.
If you'd give a critique, please keep this in mind.

