LPiA-25 Nov. 19
#4
Literary in contempt 

a mind scattered
on paper.

Fighting against himself,
always losing,
slivers win.

Could he be whole?
He should still reside -
within.

Based on Fernando Pessoa's book of disquiet
I know that rhyme, rhythm, and meter are not academically standardized.
I am well aware of that, yet I primarily do free verse, and it's based on instinctual writing.
I try to avoid academic language or structure. My poems are not meant to convey a single answer.
I try to convey the unknown through minimalism, mostly dense short stanzas with many line breaks.
If you'd give a critique, please keep this in mind.
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LPiA-25 Nov. 19 - by Tiger the Lion - 11-19-2025, 10:17 AM
RE: LPiA-25 Nov. 19 - by Todd - 11-19-2025, 01:33 PM
RE: LPiA-25 Nov. 19 - by busker - 11-19-2025, 04:55 PM
RE: LPiA-25 Nov. 19 - by MidaPoems - 11-19-2025, 05:58 PM
RE: LPiA-25 Nov. 19 - by rowens - 11-19-2025, 11:16 PM
RE: LPiA-25 Nov. 19 - by dukealien - 11-20-2025, 05:23 AM
RE: LPiA-25 Nov. 19 - by brynmawr1 - 11-20-2025, 07:53 AM
RE: LPiA-25 Nov. 19 - by Mostly Holy - 11-22-2025, 08:21 AM



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