11-15-2025, 04:44 AM
Glutenous minds
Gluttony,
A sin of mind
Filling the body,
Unhealthy, unkind.
A pigsty for us,
We grow in size,
Fed to - fat.
Machine-pressed meat
Sugary bread -
The path to an early death.
Gluttony,
A sin of mind
Filling the body,
Unhealthy, unkind.
A pigsty for us,
We grow in size,
Fed to - fat.
Machine-pressed meat
Sugary bread -
The path to an early death.
I know that rhyme, rhythm, and meter are not academically standardized.
I am well aware of that, yet I primarily do free verse, and it's based on instinctual writing.
I try to avoid academic language or structure. My poems are not meant to convey a single answer.
I try to convey the unknown through minimalism, mostly dense short stanzas with many line breaks.
If you'd give a critique, please keep this in mind.
I am well aware of that, yet I primarily do free verse, and it's based on instinctual writing.
I try to avoid academic language or structure. My poems are not meant to convey a single answer.
I try to convey the unknown through minimalism, mostly dense short stanzas with many line breaks.
If you'd give a critique, please keep this in mind.