11-14-2025, 05:56 AM
what I'd say is that it's one long sentence with good line breaks. But try to end sentences with. It can help line breaks be heavier in the poem.
otherwise, good structure.
The end of the poem may seem a bit chaotic because it's all so close together. I suggest a few line breaks there, too.
Hope I helped a bit
I’d say it begins with insecurities not seeing what others see in you no matter what.
The you go to section 2 about the harm it causes.
Section 3, the coping with the said harm.
That’s what I perceive in it
otherwise, good structure.
The end of the poem may seem a bit chaotic because it's all so close together. I suggest a few line breaks there, too.
Hope I helped a bit
I’d say it begins with insecurities not seeing what others see in you no matter what.
The you go to section 2 about the harm it causes.
Section 3, the coping with the said harm.
That’s what I perceive in it