11-10-2025, 09:08 AM
Hello and welcome to the Pigpen.
Thorough critiques are always welcome. Also, we are thrilled when new members offer many critiques rather than the bare minimum. Your many contributions are much appreciated.
Also, I thoroughly enjoyed your Siren poem. (I particularly liked the repetition of "down down/drown drown.") I have not found any of your poems to be vapid.
I hope you are enjoying your time at the pigpen and look forward to reading more of your poems. I hope the feedback in our workshops is what you are looking for.
-- Quix
Thorough critiques are always welcome. Also, we are thrilled when new members offer many critiques rather than the bare minimum. Your many contributions are much appreciated.
Also, I thoroughly enjoyed your Siren poem. (I particularly liked the repetition of "down down/drown drown.") I have not found any of your poems to be vapid.
I hope you are enjoying your time at the pigpen and look forward to reading more of your poems. I hope the feedback in our workshops is what you are looking for.
-- Quix
The Soufflé isn’t the soufflé; the soufflé is the recipe. --Clara