To You who hold the Key

[l.i.am]

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Thank you for the kind reply, I'm glad the piece has at the very least stirred some kind of emotion. When it comes to archaisms, I felt like I had done it tastefully when I had completed the draft an odd week ago, but I do agree on revision that I can make substitutions without hindering the poetry's message or vibe.

Once again, many thanks for the kind words.