11-02-2025, 03:22 PM
(11-01-2025, 09:30 PM)whisperer Wrote: There are screams in the streets of what is rightI like your poem. It feels punchy and I like the call to join in on the fight for what is right, whatever that may be.
Voices lift in one impassioned song.
Pick up your weapon and join in the fight.
The masses stand, a staggering sight
If ev’ryone's right then is everyone wrong? // I'm wondering what the distinction is here between the use of everyone and everyone. Is it pronunciation?
There are screams in the streets of what is right
The military shows its strength and might.
The marching lines are drawn and standing strong
Pick up your weapon and join in the fight
Marching and chanting from dusk until light
Flowing like a river rushing headstrong
There are screams in the streets of what is right
For all the clamor that can't be put to light // For all the clamor that hides from sight,
Sides clash with each other's prong. // They've lost themselves inside their song.
Pick up your weapon and join in the fight.
Will you stand quiet and alone tonight,
Or will you walk the path laid out long?
There are screams in the streets of what is right
Pick up your weapon and join in the fight
*I specifically need help with line #14.

