There are screams in the streets (edited)
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(11-01-2025, 09:30 PM)whisperer Wrote:  ... 

Sides clash with each other's prong.

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*I specifically need help with line #14.
More later, but perhaps something to do with tong - as in oriental secret society/criminal gang?

Sides clash, vigilante versus tong.

or

Sides clash, angry natives fighting tong.

"Tong" should then be italicized, being a foreign word?

"Hammer and tong" doesn't work because, aside from being cliche, the forge tool is always plural.
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RE: There are screams in the streets - by dukealien - 11-01-2025, 11:20 PM
RE: There are screams in the streets - by tun - 11-02-2025, 03:44 AM
RE: There are screams in the streets - by palifan - 11-05-2025, 10:53 AM



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