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The Silent City of Angels
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10-28-2025, 12:12 AM
Okay I have taken note of the criticisms of this poem, and restructured it accordingly. In terms of the length, I have made sure that every stanza fits into the large message of the poem. While not extensively shorter in length, in this revision every line in essential.
You Spend To Much Time On Being Right
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RE: The Silent City of Angels - by Deor Ana Log - 10-28-2025, 12:12 AM
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