The Silent City of Angels

The Silent City of Angels

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Today, 12:12 AM

Okay I have taken note of the criticisms of this poem, and restructured it accordingly. In terms of the length, I have made sure that every stanza fits into the large message of the poem. While not extensively shorter in length, in this revision every line in essential.

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The Silent City of Angels - by Deor Ana Log - 10-11-2025, 04:25 AM

RE: The Silent City of Angels - by Deor Ana Log - 10-14-2025, 12:56 AM

RE: The Silent City of Angels - by aschueler - 10-18-2025, 10:28 PM

RE: The Silent City of Angels - by Deor Ana Log - 10-19-2025, 07:15 AM

RE: The Silent City of Angels - by tun - 10-22-2025, 12:29 AM

RE: The Silent City of Angels - by Deor Ana Log - 10-24-2025, 02:44 AM

RE: The Silent City of Angels - by Bobby Francis - 10-24-2025, 05:40 AM

RE: The Silent City of Angels - by busker - 10-24-2025, 06:28 AM

RE: The Silent City of Angels - by Deor Ana Log - Today, 12:12 AM

RE: The Silent City of Angels - by tun - 5 hours ago

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