10-22-2025, 11:13 PM
I haven't made my way through all of your poems, and although most of them seem like a person just masturbating to their own thoughts, I hold the opinion that this one is awesome, ironically enough.
Crit away
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Hydraulic jacks.
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Hydraulic jacks. - by tun - 10-18-2025, 02:18 PM
RE: Hydraulic jacks. - by dukealien - 10-20-2025, 05:27 AM
RE: Hydraulic jacks. - by Weeded - 10-22-2025, 11:13 PM
RE: Hydraulic jacks. - by tun - 10-23-2025, 12:51 AM
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RE: Hydraulic jacks. - by tun - 10-23-2025, 01:24 AM
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