10-22-2025, 09:05 PM
It's hard to respond to this without being an asshole, my advice would be don't quit your day job.
But also, I like this, in a weird way. I like how willing you are to portray and share your vulnerability. While everyone's out there putting a mask on, here's Bitnee, with an actual photo of herself, sharing a dark moment people would do anything to forget. There's something very beautiful and inspiring about that, even if the poem falls a little flat.
more advice: stop writing. Start reading. Then come back to this, and see what you manage to come up with.
Thanks for sharing,
mike
But also, I like this, in a weird way. I like how willing you are to portray and share your vulnerability. While everyone's out there putting a mask on, here's Bitnee, with an actual photo of herself, sharing a dark moment people would do anything to forget. There's something very beautiful and inspiring about that, even if the poem falls a little flat.
more advice: stop writing. Start reading. Then come back to this, and see what you manage to come up with.
Thanks for sharing,
mike
Crit away