~Villanelle~
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Maybe: Are we not just children playing with toys? ?
Or keep 'our', although the 'our' in "our little joys" already hints at it. That comes down to nuance of meaning and feeling.
Simply: Are we not just children playing with toys? is smoother.
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~Villanelle~ - by whisperer - 10-18-2025, 10:32 PM
RE: ~Villanelle~ - by rowens - 10-20-2025, 09:34 PM
RE: ~Villanelle~ - by whisperer - 10-21-2025, 06:53 AM
RE: ~Villanelle~ - by palifan - 10-24-2025, 12:06 PM
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