The Dread the Night Brings

[Bitnee]

Thank you for your input rearranging some words and not using the word the is good advice. I don’t like using it much now that I think about it. I agree about it being longer than needed. And thank you for the advice about the capitalizing. I really did shift it later. But hey that’s why rough drafts are important. To see what revisions to make for the poem to be better.