10-19-2025, 07:54 AM
Really enjoyed. Love the lines of never tasting rain or birthday cake. It really invokes a mood.
I personally feel the metaphor of the bone works. How an actual bone would react is unimportant we aren't being literal.
The indecisive thoughts of how to react when "stuck" makes perfect sense.
My only wish is that rather than paragraphs it was in an easier format to read with line breaks.
I personally feel the metaphor of the bone works. How an actual bone would react is unimportant we aren't being literal.
The indecisive thoughts of how to react when "stuck" makes perfect sense.
My only wish is that rather than paragraphs it was in an easier format to read with line breaks.