10-15-2025, 10:09 PM
The LLMered critique with the bullets (love bullets!) is a definite improvement over the prior effort. It contains some nearly-actionable advice... or words and phrases that can be used as if they were advice.
Have you tried prompting your LLM with the command to "rewrite with improvements?" We've all heard machine-generated Mozart, but has anyone asked a LLM to write a *better* version of the Dies Irae? Writing *like* Hemingway is almost trivial; if an LLM can random-walk a dictionary from inscriptions in an unknown language and alphabet, can it make even one of our diatribes... better, if not actually good?
And what would be learned?
Have you tried prompting your LLM with the command to "rewrite with improvements?" We've all heard machine-generated Mozart, but has anyone asked a LLM to write a *better* version of the Dies Irae? Writing *like* Hemingway is almost trivial; if an LLM can random-walk a dictionary from inscriptions in an unknown language and alphabet, can it make even one of our diatribes... better, if not actually good?
And what would be learned?
Non-practicing atheist