10-15-2025, 12:54 AM
(10-15-2025, 12:39 AM)Deor Ana Log Wrote:Oh look but what 'statement' do you believe I am trying to make?(10-14-2025, 11:32 AM)busker Wrote: This is a long rant dressed as a poem, but my main grouse is that the rant is terribly pedestrian.I agree with you completely, it needs to be edited down for clarity, because the statement that Tun is try to make isn't coming across.

