10-14-2025, 11:36 PM
(10-14-2025, 11:17 PM)tun Wrote:(10-14-2025, 10:25 PM)CRNDLSM Wrote: My problem with this poem is that it truly reflects everything I see in this world right now. Things im trying not to see. Mainly: blanket generalizations of entire groups, they they they, us and them, I want mine...I think that we have the individuated and we have the unindividuated. That is a fact of life. It is an act of discrimination to identify and describe such an ontological divide in relation to the catastrophe we are living through. Discrimination is a component of any description. It is not stereotyping or generalizing to say that 'they' these people, stood apart from each other en masse - it was their choice. It is what they did. That is simply reporting a fact.
I grew up in a place that taught me my whole life that blanket generalizations and stereotypes are inherently harmful rhetoric. Inherent. So using it as so, I mean a lot of repeition here, just kinda highlights that. Everything else is lost to me, trying not to read they they they over and over again.
Its my problem though, perhaps this could actually say what you want more with less. Or maybe you got what you wanted, how could I know
Well, I believe what you're saying gets lost in the way you say it. I think youre also forgetting about people who want to die
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