10-03-2025, 03:22 AM
I wrote this piece to understand my own sadness, not to prove that I have a life; because I know I do. Why do does grief come in waves? Maybe its because accepting sadness cures something deep inside, that isn't ever solved by moving on. So there is no story to my tears, there is no point in the suffering. But it somehow happens again and again. The problem with this piece for you isn't the words or the writing, it's the human condition. And babe, I'm not sure if that we be fixed anytime soon. I declare my words in this poem not because I think they are right, but because I want them to be. There is no invitation, because I was never invited to feel sadness, just like I wasn't invited to be born. Also, this is not an attack or an argument against you personally, it's about the poem. I do admit this isn't my favorite piece, or my best words. I want you to know that I love constructive criticism, just as much as I love to respond to it. And I hope you do to!