09-21-2025, 06:08 AM
I appreciate the repetitive nature of your poem; it portrays how significant the setting was to you. Your attention to the minute details, such as "on her thin bed" and "side street in Torquay" really paint an image for the reader. I can vividly imagine the setting of this poem, and it feels as if I am there. It feels as if this is a memory of my own that I am reliving.