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Pigeon Happy Being
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09-20-2025, 04:46 AM
Simple and direct or overcomplicated for the sake of novelty. Since poetry can be more about those things than making rational points, I don't see why either is worse than the other. So far, this poem seems like the simple and direct, which could easily be a bit more complex using only linebreaks and word choice rather than more words and lines. But that would be getting further from short and direct.
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Pigeon Happy Being - by Deor Ana Log - 09-20-2025, 03:35 AM
RE: Pigeon Happy Being - by rowens - 09-20-2025, 04:17 AM
RE: Pigeon Happy Being - by Deor Ana Log - 09-20-2025, 04:25 AM
RE: Pigeon Happy Being - by rowens - 09-20-2025, 04:30 AM
RE: Pigeon Happy Being - by Deor Ana Log - 09-20-2025, 04:34 AM
RE: Pigeon Happy Being - by rowens - 09-20-2025, 04:46 AM
RE: Pigeon Happy Being - by Deor Ana Log - 09-20-2025, 04:50 AM
RE: Pigeon Happy Being - by rowens - 09-20-2025, 05:28 AM
RE: Pigeon Happy Being - by shady - 09-20-2025, 01:14 PM
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