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Pigeon Happy Being
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09-20-2025, 04:30 AM
Only that it sounds better that way to me. Comes across better to me. I am asking you and whoever else. I can be more than one person. So you can say what you like and I'll conspire. And so will the rest of people who critique the poem.
If there's a point, it's that it sounds better to my sensibilities the way I edited it. |
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Pigeon Happy Being - by Deor Ana Log - 09-20-2025, 03:35 AM
RE: Pigeon Happy Being - by rowens - 09-20-2025, 04:17 AM
RE: Pigeon Happy Being - by Deor Ana Log - 09-20-2025, 04:25 AM
RE: Pigeon Happy Being - by rowens - 09-20-2025, 04:30 AM
RE: Pigeon Happy Being - by Deor Ana Log - 09-20-2025, 04:34 AM
RE: Pigeon Happy Being - by rowens - 09-20-2025, 04:46 AM
RE: Pigeon Happy Being - by Deor Ana Log - 09-20-2025, 04:50 AM
RE: Pigeon Happy Being - by rowens - 09-20-2025, 05:28 AM
RE: Pigeon Happy Being - by shady - 09-20-2025, 01:14 PM
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