Ghosts of Summer
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Before I read your replies I was going to say I love how you're poems are provocative, relatable, and the language catches my attention. Though I'm not a parent I relate to alot of this. I assume "the crowd" in stanza two refers to family. I feel like the crowd could be metaphorical too for a life changing experience. 

Anywho, I'm glad your poem crossed my eye thanks for the read!
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Ghosts of Summer - by carahmellow - 08-22-2025, 01:24 PM
RE: Ghosts of Summer - by adagio - 08-23-2025, 05:55 AM
RE: Ghosts of Summer - by dukealien - 08-23-2025, 06:42 AM
RE: Ghosts of Summer - by carahmellow - 08-24-2025, 03:57 AM
RE: Ghosts of Summer - by Deor Ana Log - 09-19-2025, 03:24 AM
RE: Ghosts of Summer - by Bunx - 09-20-2025, 12:40 AM



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