09-20-2025, 12:40 AM
Before I read your replies I was going to say I love how you're poems are provocative, relatable, and the language catches my attention. Though I'm not a parent I relate to alot of this. I assume "the crowd" in stanza two refers to family. I feel like the crowd could be metaphorical too for a life changing experience.
Anywho, I'm glad your poem crossed my eye thanks for the read!
Anywho, I'm glad your poem crossed my eye thanks for the read!
Only one thing is impossible for God: To find any sense in any copyright law on the planet.
--mark twain
Bunx
--mark twain
Bunx

