Ascetic Lite - edit

[dukealien]

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Vacant space beside one SUV
in my two-car garage,
  when compared with many
  neighbors who must scatter
  two or three in driveways
  or at curbside to conserve
  floor for multiplying goods,
makes one feel downright
austere.

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Wasn't expecting critique in this area, but maybe the poem can stand a good edit.  Hoping the emotional weight is... spare.

Hi Duke.

...

 Still feeling my way around here and can't tell if I'm already posting too much or it's always this quiet.

P.S. I sort of look at the "waterfall" display on the left side of the homepage and throttle back if I seem overexposed.  Though I'm not averse to just chucking some chum in if things are getting too quiet.  Historically, it heats up a bit when (college) classes start in the Fall.  (Which raises a semi-relevant question:  does the standard academic year end with June graduation in the Antipodes, or with Christmas?  The Anglosphere contains worlds...)