Surprised - edit2

[dukealien]

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You’re old, almost
as old as I am now–

Surely you’ve walked
into a second or third room
and wondered why
you came here–

then found a glass
part-full of wine
in your hand
that you’d thought was empty.

But there it is
and here you are,
my dear.

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Good critique for a short work!  The typo is fixed (I'm the world's worst proofreader... of my own stuff).  And changing "half" to the less specific also avoids a difficult-to-pronounce f-to-f in that line (my lips move when I read - sometimes sounds emerge!)

Thanks!