08-22-2025, 06:45 AM
I enjoyed the "unexpected" rhyme at the end, and the overall sound. Good stuff! Just a couple of rhymes, and some internal ones (old-walked, right?) plus two-beats in almost every line create a pretty nice effect.
Why is the glass only half full though?
Oh yeah, and please correct the typo, though - thought
Why is the glass only half full though?
Oh yeah, and please correct the typo, though - thought

