Surprised - edit2

[dukealien]

Surprised


You’re old, almost
as old as I am now–

Surely you’ve walked
into a second or third room
and wondered why
you came...

then found a glass
part-full of wine
in your hand
that you’d thought was empty.

edit1;

You’re old, almost
as old as I am now–

Surely you’ve walked
into a second or third room
and wondered why
you came here–

then found a glass
part-full of wine
in your hand
that you’d thought was empty.

But there it is
and here you are,
my dear.


original version;

You’re old, almost
as old as I am now–

Surely you’ve walked
into a second or third room
and wondered why
you came here–

then found a glass
half full of wine
in your hand
that you’d though was empty.

But there it is
and here you are,
my dear.