08-20-2025, 01:40 AM
Hey Duke, stoked on your thoughtful critique. I made a few revisions in regards to the repetition of "families' in S4. As well as some typos.
Overall the basic theme of this poem is art as a casualty of war. Where art is a victim as well as civilians. Hoping to draw parallels between generations. The artist and art being erased. Art being erased by weapons or bombs, humans via displacement.
Overall the basic theme of this poem is art as a casualty of war. Where art is a victim as well as civilians. Hoping to draw parallels between generations. The artist and art being erased. Art being erased by weapons or bombs, humans via displacement.
Only one thing is impossible for God: To find any sense in any copyright law on the planet.
--mark twain
Bunx
--mark twain
Bunx