Tantra
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I’d lose the section from “ so this sounds fake” to “it is”
The rest is fantastic

I’ll provide more crit later. Just quite swamped at the moment
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Tantra - by rowens - 07-14-2025, 12:30 AM
RE: Tantra - by busker - 07-16-2025, 12:25 AM
RE: Tantra - by rowens - 07-16-2025, 12:53 AM
RE: Tantra - by MrMitchieMooMoo - 07-31-2025, 01:39 PM



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