Bricks

[adagio]

we all erected a personal wall -- erect? 
crawl behind to be small
brick by brick your wall you adore
scorned you build till the mind is sore  -- this word order makes it quite hard to read and understand. Can it be more natural?
but what point did you notice no door
blocked so much it pains your core -- are you blocked, or is "no door blocked"?
locked in the dark afraid of light -- you need more than one wall to find yourself in the dark!
afraid to loose my inner flight -- why transition to first person all of a sudden? should it be "your inner flight"?
hatred and prejudice reinforce this wall
bricks donated by you all
security wall transforms to a tomb
that peaceful voice whispers soon... -- what does the voice whisper? I am not sure I understand this ending