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Useful Idleness

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06-28-2025, 03:41 PM

(06-02-2025, 05:12 AM)brynmawr1 Wrote: I was close to ending to poem at that line even after it was fully written. It might happen yet.

Yes, I too think this poem could be shorter. Maybe recombine the couplets somehow to keep the best ones?

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Useful Idleness - by brynmawr1 - 05-31-2025, 02:18 PM

RE: Useful Idleness - by busker - 05-31-2025, 08:21 PM

RE: Useful Idleness - by brynmawr1 - 06-02-2025, 05:12 AM

RE: Useful Idleness - by adagio - 06-28-2025, 03:41 PM

RE: Useful Idleness - by nana - 06-30-2025, 05:56 AM

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