Extravagant Breakfast
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Extravagant Breakfast

I wonder if a burning womb shares
 . . . also.
Human flesh carries the same
scent as
gingham-clad Freedom,
folded-wicker into . . . guns.

If I’m to have such an extravagant breakfast
 . . . 
I'm your man.

I want to eat . . . to teach
your children what it means: to
patronize, to placate, to preserve. . . .

I'm using the show not tell rule also in the realm of critique
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Extravagant Breakfast - by ecofreak20 - 06-15-2025, 09:13 AM
RE: Extravagant Breakfast - by busker - 06-15-2025, 02:18 PM
RE: Extravagant Breakfast - by ecofreak20 - 06-16-2025, 09:26 AM
RE: Extravagant Breakfast - by rowens - 06-16-2025, 06:59 AM
RE: Extravagant Breakfast - by rowens - 06-16-2025, 10:23 AM



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