05-26-2025, 08:46 AM
“ In another life,
I'd love to be her friend.
Sharing each other's poems,
talking about Heaven.”
Could be a nice short poem by itself.
Maybe instead of “I’d love to be…”, have the more direct “I’d be..”?
Nice one
I'd love to be her friend.
Sharing each other's poems,
talking about Heaven.”
Could be a nice short poem by itself.
Maybe instead of “I’d love to be…”, have the more direct “I’d be..”?
Nice one