05-18-2025, 06:53 PM
yep with mine I try to go against Iambic as I feel with spoken English these days a lot actual language doesn't flow in 10 to 11 syllables but fluctuates a lot more. Ive written a few which do try to stick to Iambic pentameter but then have the occasional Trochee in as well, to spice things up. Thanks for looking over the poem and I can see what you mean about the various words which should be changed.
Its really great to get a critique I can build on so honestly, a heartfelt thanks.
Its really great to get a critique I can build on so honestly, a heartfelt thanks.