My Shattered Dreams
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Sometimes poetry is too specific and personal to be universally relatable. I understand the pain, but it's spinning 'venting'. I also don't want to give the specific man any attention at all, it just fuels the party. He's had too much attention. I can't tell if the poem is more politically charged or gender charged. I wish there was a more subtle way here to show the frustration of a woman in this country's current political environment, but some women are actually proud of this state, transwomen? Legally now there's no such thing so, I don't know. My suggestion is put the anger aside to bring me into poem, I want to feel your pain so any party can relate. Good luck
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My Shattered Dreams - by twowza - 05-04-2025, 11:59 PM
RE: My Shattered Dreams - by CRNDLSM - 05-05-2025, 02:08 AM
RE: My Shattered Dreams - by RiverNotch - 05-05-2025, 12:59 PM
RE: My Shattered Dreams - by meadzbabyy - 05-13-2025, 03:09 PM
RE: My Shattered Dreams - by dukealien - 05-13-2025, 10:12 PM



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