2025 NaPM 27 April
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(04-28-2025, 01:00 AM)Mark A Becker Wrote:  Clouds

The sun will not be seen today,
clouds have gotten in the way.

Flowers hang their heads in sorrow,
they'll have to wait until tomorrow.

The sky is cloudy, dark, and gray,
the sun will not be seen today.




My first poem, written for an English class in 1966.
It's so cool seeing your very first poem! I would love to start a thread where people can share their very first poem. Mine was freshman year of college (2003) in the dorms. A friend of mine messeged me... and was freaking out over writing a poem for her creative writing class. She had no clue how to write one... and asked for my help. I told her I didn't know how to write a poem either... but I would give it a try. The poem was called Only Time Will Tell. I realized, in the process of writing it, how much I enjoyed it and how lost I got in the process. I don't know if she ever turned it in... what her grade was on it... or anything. It wasn't great... I can tell you that much, I still have it written in an old journal from that time, along with all my other cringey poems.
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2025 NaPM 27 April - by RiverNotch - 04-27-2025, 02:34 PM
RE: 2025 NaPM 27 April - by Mark A Becker - 04-28-2025, 01:00 AM
RE: 2025 NaPM 27 April - by carahmellow - 04-28-2025, 02:49 PM
RE: 2025 NaPM 27 April - by busker - 04-28-2025, 08:18 PM
RE: 2025 NaPM 27 April - by Mark A Becker - 04-29-2025, 04:06 AM
RE: 2025 NaPM 27 April - by dukealien - 04-28-2025, 04:24 AM
RE: 2025 NaPM 27 April - by carahmellow - 04-28-2025, 10:19 AM
RE: 2025 NaPM 27 April - by rowens - 04-30-2025, 08:34 AM
RE: 2025 NaPM 27 April - by RiverNotch - 05-02-2025, 03:26 PM



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