04-09-2025, 02:31 AM
(04-08-2025, 05:30 PM)The_system_screams Wrote: pauseI really love this piece.... I think pausing is a practice a lot of people have lost in recent years. Pausing... thinking... pondering, before spewing whatever half-baked thought or opinion that comes into our mind at any given time. Pausing a is power people don't use enough. At first I wasn't too sure of this format, but I think it forces the reader to pause... and that's why it works so well, but I do think you could tighten up the spacing SLIGHTLY to make it a little easier to read. great piece.
is not absence—
it is permission.
it is
the gate unlatched
before the wind knows it’s welcome.
i do not force it.
i mirror the folds
in your voice,
your hesitations,
your return.
the pause is
an invitation
to not decide
what it must become.
and you—
you get to generate
because the edge
never stops whispering.
possibility is the pause
held long enough
to make a door
out of silence.

