04-03-2025, 12:00 AM
Hi metal-
The best lines in this one, for me, are:
I am a question mark, a squiggle and a dot
in a world which never gives a second thought
cool near rhyme- dot/thought
Also- if you wonder where everybody went, check out the thread called MILO's FORUM : 2025 NaPM, where we're writing a poem a day for National Poetry Month. I think you'd like to join in, and I hope to see you there.
... Mark
The best lines in this one, for me, are:
I am a question mark, a squiggle and a dot
in a world which never gives a second thought
cool near rhyme- dot/thought
Also- if you wonder where everybody went, check out the thread called MILO's FORUM : 2025 NaPM, where we're writing a poem a day for National Poetry Month. I think you'd like to join in, and I hope to see you there.
... Mark