Fury's Lover
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Quite a ride!  And all the transitions/combinations perfectly credible.

The last two lines are a nice turn:  feebleness and fragility are objective conditions, not emotional states.  Mentioning them suggests where all the passions are based - without coming right out and saying so.  While also suggesting that the narrator may be aware of this.

Fury's lover, then, is weakness - as war's dad is fear.
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Fury's Lover - by carahmellow - 03-15-2025, 07:48 AM
RE: Fury's Lover - by dukealien - 03-15-2025, 09:32 AM
RE: Fury's Lover - by brynmawr1 - 03-15-2025, 09:53 AM
RE: Fury's Lover - by carahmellow - 03-16-2025, 02:50 AM
RE: Fury's Lover - by busker - 03-16-2025, 05:43 AM



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