03-15-2025, 09:32 AM
Quite a ride! And all the transitions/combinations perfectly credible.
The last two lines are a nice turn: feebleness and fragility are objective conditions, not emotional states. Mentioning them suggests where all the passions are based - without coming right out and saying so. While also suggesting that the narrator may be aware of this.
Fury's lover, then, is weakness - as war's dad is fear.
The last two lines are a nice turn: feebleness and fragility are objective conditions, not emotional states. Mentioning them suggests where all the passions are based - without coming right out and saying so. While also suggesting that the narrator may be aware of this.
Fury's lover, then, is weakness - as war's dad is fear.
Non-practicing atheist

