03-08-2025, 08:03 PM
I like the tangible images that you have used through the poem. There’s a richness of imagery in every strophe.
It is too easy to make a poem on this topic a mass of abstractions but you have avoided that pitfall with great aplomb
Great going!!
It is too easy to make a poem on this topic a mass of abstractions but you have avoided that pitfall with great aplomb
Great going!!