03-06-2025, 05:44 AM
I love the overall flow and pacing of the poem but I feel like it kind of gets interrupted around "if we're a pair, billie, then the the weather..." but that's just what I'm getting from that part.
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flock together, v2 - by RiverNotch - 03-05-2025, 01:04 PM
RE: flock together - by busker - 03-05-2025, 04:59 PM
RE: flock together - by midnightcowboy - 03-06-2025, 05:44 AM
RE: flock together - by busker - 03-06-2025, 06:31 AM
RE: flock together, v2 - by RiverNotch - 03-07-2025, 02:25 PM
RE: flock together, v2 - by Mark A Becker - 03-08-2025, 01:56 AM
RE: flock together, v2 - by RiverNotch - 03-09-2025, 12:30 PM
RE: flock together, v2 - by busker - 03-09-2025, 07:43 PM
RE: flock together, v2 - by saintlikeface-ghostlikesoul - 03-14-2025, 08:13 AM
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