03-05-2025, 04:59 PM
Extraordinary. Gorgeous.
I love the cormonrant in an oil slick transitioning to Australian black swans. If you meant Australian black swans.
The poem takes off from the image of the fucking ducks and culminates in “grief”
The last three strophes are a beautiful climb down leading to the end
Wouldn’t change a thing
I love the cormonrant in an oil slick transitioning to Australian black swans. If you meant Australian black swans.
The poem takes off from the image of the fucking ducks and culminates in “grief”
The last three strophes are a beautiful climb down leading to the end
Wouldn’t change a thing

