03-05-2025, 07:23 AM
The turns of phrase in the poem are wildly unexpected
Unanticipable
Achieves the effect. Nice poem
BUT
there’s always a BUT
It needs to make literal sense too. This one doesn’t.
Nothing beats that Ronny asshole poem
Unanticipable
Achieves the effect. Nice poem
BUT
there’s always a BUT
It needs to make literal sense too. This one doesn’t.
Nothing beats that Ronny asshole poem

