Oahu
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Hello!
i love the motif of ants and beaches/island.
I think the “this” in “planes fly TO THIS island,” is a little unnecessary and may sound better with “the”
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Oahu - by Bunx - 02-14-2025, 04:18 PM
RE: Oahu - by midnightcowboy - 02-21-2025, 02:30 PM
RE: Oahu - by Trillium - 03-16-2025, 03:11 AM
RE: Oahu - by busker - 03-16-2025, 05:38 AM



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