Solitary
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Yeah, it sounds like you are talking to someone in rhyme with a haphazard meter.

That is ok to talk to that someone; but prolly they aren't who you are talking to. You are making a poem. You aren't talking, you're creating art.
You are creating new turns of phrase. That is what you can do. Turn your sentences that are expressing your ideas and feelings into unique phrases.
Do that, and then, if you can, make those things metered and rhymed.
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Solitary - by carahmellow - 02-02-2025, 06:59 AM
RE: Solitary - by brynmawr1 - 02-02-2025, 08:21 AM
RE: Solitary - by carahmellow - 02-02-2025, 03:30 PM
RE: Solitary - by rowens - 02-02-2025, 03:43 PM
RE: Solitary - by carahmellow - 02-02-2025, 04:34 PM
RE: Solitary - by rowens - 02-02-2025, 05:32 PM



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