01-21-2025, 12:59 PM
“ those imposed at death are tough
to service with no verbal puff
of breath to cry revenge.”
“yet, mouthless, can’t enjoy the sup
that’s said to taste best cold.”
Some great lines
I like the epigram / epitaph / class slant rhymes
And the revenge / cold connection between S3 and S4
to service with no verbal puff
of breath to cry revenge.”
“yet, mouthless, can’t enjoy the sup
that’s said to taste best cold.”
Some great lines
I like the epigram / epitaph / class slant rhymes
And the revenge / cold connection between S3 and S4