The Disadvantages
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Well done Duke.  Nice rhyme scheme throughout, though the last non-rhyme at the end is particularly pleasing.
bryn
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The Disadvantages - by dukealien - 01-21-2025, 05:41 AM
RE: The Disadvantages - by brynmawr1 - 01-21-2025, 10:30 AM
RE: The Disadvantages - by busker - 01-21-2025, 12:59 PM



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