12-04-2024, 09:53 AM
I throughly enjoy the piece, especially the shake up towards the end, I dont quite get the first three lines though,
'I don't very much like what poems say when I put mustard on my hot dog'
while I don't mind surrealism, I think this could read clearer without ruining the lines.
Is the dash suppose to be between on and my? Said as one word 'onmy' or two separate phrases, I put mustard on: my hot dog.
'I don't very much like what poems say when I put mustard on my hot dog'
while I don't mind surrealism, I think this could read clearer without ruining the lines.
Is the dash suppose to be between on and my? Said as one word 'onmy' or two separate phrases, I put mustard on: my hot dog.
Peanut butter honey banana sandwiches