05-31-2010, 02:52 PM
(05-31-2010, 01:49 PM)Bianca Alabaster Wrote: If everything upon the earthi love the way the first two verse builds up to the last.
were to melt away;
the mountains, rivers,
and trees.
And the whole universe
just disappeared;
the sun, moon and stars.
And I were standing
on the cold, barren, ground…
I could live
in the memories
of you
and still be happy.
©
for me it's sweet and easy to read and understand. and it speaks much more than the three verse it contains. nicely done with this one bianca.
