Nitty gritty ditty (lyrics any crit)

[CRNDLSM]

Hi CRNDLSM,

guitar part one for me (though the second one works if you're going for the comedy/light version.)
Very interesting! I thought the lyrics themselves were too country for it, 

The lyrics could still do with a bit of polishing, but the one thing that let's it down, for me, is 'nitty, gritty ditty' - it feels like you/it has moved beyond that.
I'm workshopping it with a band mate, what if I just cut the word 'ditty' cause nitty and gritty go together and I have all those other iddy rhymes, 

Let it all out in the nitty,(space) gritty 

Best, Knot.