Nitty gritty ditty (lyrics any crit)
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Hi CRNDLSM,

guitar part one for me (though the second one works if you're going for the comedy/light version.)
The lyrics could still do with a bit of polishing, but the one thing that let's it down, for me, is 'nitty, gritty ditty' - it feels like you/it has moved beyond that.

Best, Knot.
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Nitty gritty ditty (lyrics any crit) - by CRNDLSM - 06-16-2024, 09:01 PM
RE: Nitty gritty ditty (lyrics any crit) - by Knot - 10-25-2024, 10:48 PM



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