10-25-2024, 10:48 PM
Hi CRNDLSM,
guitar part one for me (though the second one works if you're going for the comedy/light version.)
The lyrics could still do with a bit of polishing, but the one thing that let's it down, for me, is 'nitty, gritty ditty' - it feels like you/it has moved beyond that.
Best, Knot.
guitar part one for me (though the second one works if you're going for the comedy/light version.)
The lyrics could still do with a bit of polishing, but the one thing that let's it down, for me, is 'nitty, gritty ditty' - it feels like you/it has moved beyond that.
Best, Knot.

