Allamanda v2

[Magpie]

Hi River this is beautiful, I think it slightly suffers due to the structure you have used. Not sure if it is a specific format. I left a couple of notes.

Allamanda


These flowers once were like new love,
like showers from a cloudless sky,  -- the metaphor would be stronger here, don't need like, but syllable count
or else like love well-tested, shafts -- another like here, a lot of 'like' in this stanza -- enjambment seems awkward just for the sake of the syllable count
of early morning light,

but now their common name is apt:
but now they're simply tolling bells  
or trumpets waiting for the breath -- can you toll a trumpet, 'tolling' could be changed to 'sounding' but it's not as good a word and you need to keep 'trumpets' as that's what the flowers are. Decisions, decisions...
of angels.

I like it and the path it lead me on to read about them also.
Cheers for the read.